You make some interesting points, and cover lots of ground, Nathan. This is well-focussed; good. - Some of your points are a bit convoluted and far fetched...I don't think they are at the bottom of the shot to represent their Southern roots! Aim for formal language -not 'chilled out', etc. - In sound, don't focus too much on dialogue; only one point on this, I think. - I think a few of your points could be in greater depth, to really analyse WHY identity is represented in this way. Grade: B
You make some interesting points, and cover lots of ground, Nathan. This is well-focussed; good.
ReplyDelete- Some of your points are a bit convoluted and far fetched...I don't think they are at the bottom of the shot to represent their Southern roots!
Aim for formal language -not 'chilled out', etc.
- In sound, don't focus too much on dialogue; only one point on this, I think.
- I think a few of your points could be in greater depth, to really analyse WHY identity is represented in this way.
Grade: B